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Old 25-Oct-2006, 12:16
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• The name of a newly added user cannot repeat that of an existing user.
The name of a new user must be unique.
Reason :It is redundant when written as newly added user.
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Old 25-Oct-2006, 17:25
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Default Re: is this okay- any valid suggestions?

Your phraseology looks fine to me. I agree that "newly added" is redundant, but keep in mind that quite often written instructions or directions are purposely redundant in order to be as explicit as possible.
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