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Old 26-Oct-2006, 14:31
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Hello teachers,

The sentence below sounds a bit weird altho I could not fathom out what is wrong with it. Could you please help?

"My result broke record to be the highest for the first time in 3 years in the history of the course I'm pursueing."

Thanks so much in advance. :)
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Kenneth
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Old 26-Oct-2006, 19:42
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"My result broke record to be the highest for the first time in 3 years in the history of the course I'm pursueing."

My result broke the record by being the highest for 3 years in the history of the course I'm pursuing
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