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Old 01-Feb-2004, 06:40
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Dear Teacher,

Could you please correct the following sentences?

“ I don't hate you as accused by someone. I am even more receptive to many aspects of your culture than are anybody else. I just can't tolerate some convenient accusations by some ignorant people. ”

Many thanks :)
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Old 01-Feb-2004, 08:17
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Originally Posted by pasiree
Dear Teacher,

Could you please correct the following sentences?

“ I don't hate you as accused by someone. I am even more receptive to many aspects of your culture than are anybody else. I just can't tolerate some convenient accusations by some ignorant people. ”

Many thanks :)
I am not a teacher but I want to rewrite your paragraph so check my writing abilities. :wink:


" I do not feel hatred for you like others.I am willing to know and talk more and more about different aspects of your culture than anyone else.I can't tolerate accusation by someone who knows nothing."


:wink:
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Old 01-Feb-2004, 14:42
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Originally Posted by pasiree
Dear Teacher,

Could you please correct the following sentences?

“ I don't hate you as accused by someone. I am even more receptive to many aspects of your culture than are anybody else. I just can't tolerate some convenient accusations by some ignorant people. ”

Many thanks :)
I do not hate you as some accuse me. I am more receptive to many aspects of your culture than anybody else. I junst cannot tolerate some cheap accusations made by certain ignorant people.-0
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