is this okay- any valid suggestions?

[hemmin]

• For a VDSL interface, the information include: port state, line state; port description; bind line-template; hardware; last up time and down time; current operational mode; current channel downstream and upstream rate; total count of line training; total number of downstream and upstream cells; total count of line training; total number of downstream and upstream packets; total count of line training; total number of downstream and upstream discarded packets due to congestion; related information on PVC.
suggested
This command displays the following information:
port state, line state; port description; bind line-template; hardware; last up time and down time; current operational mode; current channel downstream and upstream rate; total count of line training; total number of downstream and upstream cells; total count of line training; total number of downstream and upstream packets; total count of line training; total number of downstream and upstream discarded packets due to congestion; related information on PVC.

[JSmiley]

what is "bind line-template" and "count of line training" and what are "cells"???

other than unfamiliar terms, the English looks good.