Photograph Shop

[namsteven]

Dear Teachers,

- Go straight ahead, go past the pawnshop. You’ll see a roundabout. Just turn around the roundabout into Lotus street. Go straight this street, you’ll see a T-juntion / a T. Turn right at the lotus hotel onto Charles street. Go past the laundry about 20 meters, the photograph store will be on your right next to the music store. You can’t miss it.

- Is this ok and grammatical?

Thanks a million

Namsteven

[JSmiley]

Dear Teachers,
- Go straight ahead, go past the pawnshop. You’ll see a roundabout. Just turn around the roundabout into Lotus street. Go straight this street, you’ll see a T-juntion / a T. Turn right at the lotus hotel onto Charles street. Go past the laundry about 20 meters, the photograph store will be on your right next to the music store. You can’t miss it.
- Is this ok and grammatical?
Thanks a million
Namsteven

This is nearly perfect according to the rules. Some things you could have said more concisely or clearly. Heres an edit:

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- Go straight ahead, go past the pawnshop, and you’ll see a roundabout. Just take the roundabout onto Lotus Street and go straight this street. You’ll see a T-junction / a T. Turn right at the Lotus Hotel onto Charles Street. Go past the laundry about 20 meters, and the photograph store will be on your right, next to the music store. You can’t miss it.
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Anyway, it's all very understandable the way you posted it. Very good work!
-Jesse