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please mark any mistakes you find . Thank you so much.
( especailly the red parts)
1. Please arrange this order as one of special urgency.
2.I wish that you are satisfied with the handling of your order and this relationship with you lead to mutually beneficial relationship with you.
3.In order to offer the better service, we have expanded and rearranged many departments.
4.I am plesed to accept this position [COLOR="red"]in accordance with the condition mentioned in your letter and confirm that I can start working from October 1.

[JSmiley]

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1. Please flag this order as one of special urgency.
2.I hope that you are satisfied with the handling of your order and that this relationship with you will lead to a mutually beneficial relationship with you.
3.In order to offer the better service, we have expanded and rearranged many departments.
4.I am pleased to accept this position in accordance with the conditions mentioned in your letter, and confirm that I can start working from October 1st.