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Hi,

could you please proofread the following text, especially the highlighted parts:

We flew to London on December 31, 2005 at 10.00 a.m. with flight no. ME 1829. Our luggage was checked in to the target destination in Norway. In London, we found out that the plane to Norway, flight MP 639, had left several hours earlier. With regard to the fact that we were offered an alternative flight no sooner than in 2-3 days, we flew back to Prague within several hours.

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Hi,

could you please proofread the following text, especially the highlighted parts:

We flew to London on December 31, 2005 at 10.00 a.m. on flight no. ME 1829. Our luggage was checked in to the target destination in Norway. In London, we found out that the plane to Norway, flight no. MP 639, had left several hours earlier. With regard to the fact that the alternative flight we were offered was not for 2-3 days, we flew back to Prague instead.

Thank you very much.

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