
30-Nov-2006, 02:35
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Tense agreement problem? Quote: |
That means if anyone, be that a serial killer who intends to snipe random people on the street or a 14-year-old kid who wants revenge on his bully classmate, wanted to buy a gun, the supply is ample. Not only does the industry turn a blind eye on its distribution system, some of it shamelessly aims for the criminal market by advertising features in their products that are specifically appealing to criminals. A feature one manufacturer emphasized was that its gun has “an excellent resistance to fingerprints.” (qtd. in Sibel, 416)
| Should I keep the tense consistent where boldened? I'd rather keep it if possible, because the gun still exists and it still is fingerprint-resistant, but the fact that the gun manufacturer mentioned posted such ad has already happened, and thus a thing of the past.
And if there are any other problems, could you revise it? thank you very much! |