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The essay claims that the overall crime rates in the U.S. dropped contrary to Britain, where gun-related crimes tripled in the last 10 years.
Is the usage of 'contrary to' OK in the quoted sentence? It doesn't sound too right to me, but I couldn't think of any alternatives off hand. If another word / phrase is more appropriate, can you suggest some options?
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How about "...dropped, in contrast to Britain where gun..."
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Default Re: Usage of 'contrary to'

It might be better to say;

The essay claims that, over the last ten years, gun related crimes have dropped in the US in contrast to Britain where there has been a ten-fold increase over the same period.
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