a sentence

[PINKGREAT]

Every year in month of March at the village fence of the hamlet a ragged Gypsy tribe has been scattering its marquee and with a shriek of penny whistle and a jingle of a tambourin it introduced inhabitants of Macondo with the latest inventions of men of science.

[MikeNewYork]

Every year in month of March at the village fence of the hamlet a ragged Gypsy tribe has been scattering its marquee and with a shriek of penny whistle and a jingle of a tambourin it introduced inhabitants of Macondo with the latest inventions of men of science.

It could use some punctuation. Also "in the month of March".

[PINKGREAT]

Dear teachers.

Is my puntanctuation right now?

Every year, in the month of March, at the village fence of the hamlet, a ragged Gypsy tribe has been scattering its marquee and, with a shriek of a penny whistle and a jingle of a tambourin, it introduced inhabitants of Macondo with the latest inventions of men of science.

[RonBee]

I would say:

it introduced inhabitants of Macondo to the latest inventions of men of science

(The punctuation looks fine.)

~R

[MikeNewYork]

Dear teachers.

Is my puntanctuation right now?

Every year, in the month of March, at the village fence of the hamlet, a ragged Gypsy tribe has been scattering its marquee and, with a shriek of a penny whistle and a jingle of a tambourin, it introduced inhabitants of Macondo with the latest inventions of men of science.

Much, much better.

[PINKGREAT]

Thank you very much. It was of a great help for real. Thanks!

[MikeNewYork]

Thank you very much. It was of a great help for real. Thanks!

You're welcome.