A Model Teacher--Correction and suggestion
I wrote this little essay and could you please give some corrections or suggestions? Please make as much change as possible. I want to see the clear difference between my 'chinglish' and your real English.
Thanks a lot.
One of my teachers says," A good teacher is no 'knowledge mover', who moves the knowledge from the textbook to students". As a student, I must say, I'm totally with that. And I'd like to add," A good teacher should be a knowledge guide, who shows you the door which leads to the exploration of the spiritual world by his or her inspiration. As college students, we don't and shouldn't have any reading problems. That is, we students move the knowledge from the textbook to our mind. Then it's a teacher's job to share with you his or her experiences, which shows you a new fresh perspective from a teacher's standpoint. With your own understanding and a teacher's inspiration, I think you can make a model learner. And meanwhile, your teacher can make a model teacher.