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Thread: Please correct this sentence
- 13-Dec-2006, 08:13 #1
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Please correct this sentence Kindly correct the following sentence
Upon contact the supplier,they refused to do so due to nonpayment
- 13-Dec-2006, 08:39 #2
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Teacher Re: Please correct this sentence It's unclear- what did they refuse to do?
On contacting the supplier, they refused to send more (???) due to nonpayment.
Or
The supplier refused to send more...
- 13-Dec-2006, 08:45 #3
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Re: Please correct this sentence How about this:
Originally Posted by JRD 
The supplier refused to negotiate for a new contract with us due to our failing to meet financial obligations.
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