is this correct? ;)

[Ksunya]

hi
Is this sentence correct? can I say contribute in this sentence? or should I use another verb?

So, in such a way, 'merely technical trick', brilliantly forethought and fulfulled, contribures to deepening and revealing of characters and play's idea.

Thanks in advance
Ksu

[Mister Micawber]

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Contributes is OK here, but there are many other problems with your sentence.
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[Ksunya]

Yes, I know...but after translating this sentence from russian, I m so confused that can't find any.
what are they?

[curmudgeon]

So, the use of a mere 'technical trick', brilliantly thought out and delivered, contributes to the depth and portrayal of the characters and interpretation of the play.



Maybe I've gone too far

[Ksunya]

Well, what can I say. I have been learning english for several years and now it struck me I don't know anything this to contribute turned to be the only word that is correct. Funny. Thanks for help

[curmudgeon]

As I said, perhaps I have used too much license. The original is probably very different. I interpreted your interpretation, which is not always a good thing. Your English is OK

[Mister Micawber]

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With minimal changes:

So, such a 'merely technical trick', brilliantly conceived and realised, contributes to deepening and revealing the characters and the theme [?] of the play.


If merely technical trick is not a direct quote, it should need no quotation marks. I would also like to use a variation on curmudgeon's version: the depth of character portrayal.
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