HELP me OUT, please

[Romana]

could you correct mistakes, please? and pay atention on words, which are in bold...would you choose another word? thank you very much for your answer!
S:Luke, what time do you get up?
L:About eleven o'clock. You see I usually go to bed at three or four in the morning. I like(love) working at night. It's a good time for me.
S:And when do you start work?
L:Well, first I have breakfast -two black coffees- I do like eating in the morning, and then I go running. I start work at twelve o'clock and I work from twelve to about six in the evening.
S:And then?
L:I sometimes go to the cinema with friends or stay at home and watch a video. Then I start work again from twelve to three or four. Sometimes I paint for twenty-four hours and then I sleep for twenty-four hours!

[Tdol]

They're fine.

[Romana]

All of them? ;) I'm sceptic a little bit
thank You!

[weezer99]

Everything look good to me!!!

[BobK]

All of them? ;) I'm sceptic a little bit
thank You!

Don't be, Romana - they really are fine

b

ps You should say 'I'm a bit sceptical', or maybe - in this context - 'I'm not too confident/sure'

[RonBee]

All of your sentences are perfectly fine, but say:

Pay attention to

~R