Any suggestions

[hemmin]

You can set only the port connected to the terminal as an edge port. When the BPDU protection is disabled from the switching device, after the port receives the BPDD packets, even if the port is set as an edge port, it still works as a non edge port. By default, all ports are set as non edge ports.
Suggested:
You can set only the port connected to the terminal as an edge port. The BPDU protection is disabled from the switching device, the port receives the BPDD packets. Even if the port is set as an edge port, it still works as an non-edge port. By default, all ports are set as non-edge ports.

[Anglika]

I think you still need "When" in front of "the BDPU protection", since presumably the BPDD packets are received after it is switched off. Otherwise, it looks ok to me.