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It is no denying that the primary reason for University¡¯s existence is helping students become more socially adaptable and suit for the feature career. But in my opinion, the function of college is not only for better job.
The justification for a university also imports students¡¯ knowledge and skills, which is essential to their high study such as master or doctor. With the comparatively systematic and comprehensive study, many of them will be experts. The great changes will take place in the world by these professional.
In addition, one in campus is help to be cultivated independence, self-determination and sense of responsibility, learn to communicate and cooperate with others and thus develop his/her interpersonal skill. Father more, students acquire the ability to manage money matters at an early age and learn to balance income and expenditure.
All in all, the university not only lead students to living in the society, but also improve their knowledge and skill, widens horizon and shape character. Study in university is a significant stage in one¡¯s life.

[RonBee]

Originally Posted by S.H.E*

It is no denying that the primary reason for University¡¯s existence is helping students become more socially adaptable and suit for the feature career. But in my opinion, the function of college is not only for better job.

Try:

• There is no denying that the primary reason for the existence of the university is to help students become more socially adaptable and better suited for their future careers. But in my opinion the function of college is not only to help people get better jobs.

Originally Posted by S.H.E*

The justification for a university also imports students¡¯ knowledge and skills, which is essential to their high study such as master or doctor.

Try:

• The function of a university is to impart knowledge and to help people acquire skills.

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