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[sweetie_sneha]

Dear Teacher,

Is the following paragraph correct?

As Mr. Naresh had a meeting yesterday with Mr. Suman of M/s Royal Plastics, he discussed about our new products. The customer showed interest in our products and is ready to buy them if we offer the best price. So, Please let us know the best price to offer.

Regards,


Sweetie.

[Anglika]

Dear Teacher,

Is the following paragraph correct?

As [delete - not required here]Mr. Naresh had a meeting yesterday with Mr. Suman of M/s Royal Plastics, at which he discussed about [delete - not required here]our new products. The customer showed interest in our products and is ready to buy them if we offer the best price. Please let us know the best price to offer.

Regards,


Sweetie.

[Mordant]

I agree with Anglika but the word offer may be misplaced.

If you are setting your prices to be competitive you are not offering prices as such. Offering is normally done by the buyer. The buyer offers to buy your goods.

You want to know what price they would offer to buy at.

You may say,

The customer showed interest in our products and is ready to buy if the price is right.

Please let us know the price you wish to offer.

[sweetie_sneha]

I agree with Anglika but the word offer may be misplaced.

If you are setting your prices to be competitive you are not offering prices as such. Offering is normally done by the buyer. The buyer offers to buy your goods.

You want to know what price they would offer to buy at.

You may say,

The customer showed interest in our products and is ready to buy if the price is right.

Please let us know the price you wish to offer.

Thanks a lot to both of you for the help.

Sweetie.