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Old 19-Jan-2007, 14:51
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Hi,

could you please proofread the following text:

The member approves conclusion of the contracts on the basis of which the Company, with a view to pay its obligations towards the member, will assign its claims against debtors under the following conditions.

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Shouldn't it end with a colon as you're going to list the conditions?
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Yes, my mistake
And is "with a view to pay" correct or is "with a view to paying" better?
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