Please correct my paragraph and gramma

[terry]

Description of Slideshow Application



The front-end interface allow user to view the page PhotoGallery.aspx(which display the title of each Slideshow).User can click one of the title listed to transfer to another page called SlideofSlideshow.aspx. In this page user will see next and previous button used to navigate to different slides of Slideshow. Also, launch button used to play all slides of Slideshow automatically.

The back-end interface allow administrator to add new SlideShow and slides within SlideShow.

[2utopian]

Description of Slideshow Application



The front-end interface allows the user to view the page with PhotoGallery.aspx(which displays the title of each slideshow).Users can click one of the titles listed to transfer it to another page called SlideofSlideshow.aspx. In this page users will see th Next and Previous buttons used to navigate to different slides of Slideshow. Also, the Launch button will play all slides of Slideshow automatically.

The back-end interface allows administrators to add new a SlideShow and slides within SlideShow.

This is how I would write it. I am a technical writer.