please check on my paragraph...

[Anonymous]

Ok, I have decided to practice writing so I can improve my writing skills. So if there are mistakes please excuse my gibberish writing.


I have to say that I'm very regret for not putting much effort on learning when i was in school. I never really tried in school or I should say on anything that I did. But today I'm here to ask everyone of you to help me on my English. I have told myself that I will practice writing once a while, but so far I have not done nor try anything to improve my English. From now on I will try to sharpen my tools and start learning English from this forum. I do wish I could have someone to communicate or write to (AIM messages, MSN, ect.). So, if anyone are interested please let me know.

Ok, I guess I'm through with my rubbish paragraph. Please check it whenever you are available. Thank you. (and I do mean it about the communicate part)

[Tdol]

I have to say that I'm very regret for not putting much effort on learning when i was in school.

I would change this a bit:

I have to say that I deeply regret not putting much effort into learning when I was at school.

This is because 'regret' isn't an adjective. You could use 'regretful', but that doesn't sound as natural to me. Welcome to the forum. I will have a look at the rest of the paragraph in a minute when I have time.

[RonBee]

I never really tried in school or I should say on anything that I did.

Perhaps:

• I never made much of an effort in school or, really, at anything I have done.

:)

[Chizu]

alright thanks, hmm... I just noticed that i have two stars!!! how did that happen?

[Tdol]

alright thanks, hmm... I just noticed that i have two stars!!! how did that happen?

It's based on the number of posts you makes. I'm not sure how it works it out,though.

[RonBee]

But today I'm here to ask everyone of you to help me on my English.

Say:

• But today I'm here to ask everyone of you to help me with my English.

I have told myself that I will practice writing once a while, but so far I have not done nor try anything to improve my English.

Say:

• I have told myself that I will practice writing once a while, but so far I have not done anything to improve my English.

From now on I will try to sharpen my tools and start learning English from this forum.

Say:

• From now on I will try to sharpen my tools and start learning English on this forum.

Or:

• From now on I will try to sharpen my tools and start learning English from the people on this forum.

I do wish I could have someone to communicate or write to (AIM messages, MSN, ect.). So, if anyone are interested please let me know.

Say:

• I do wish I could have someone to communicate with or write to (AIM messages, MSN, ect.). So, if anyone is interested, please let me know.

The word anyone is considered singular.

:)

[Chizu]

thanks a lot :)

[RonBee]

You're quite welcome.