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Dear experts,

First of all sorry for my poor english.
Please correct the following text:

I have been living in israel for four years, so I can say I know them.
Two first-hand experiences:
1. I worked together with arabs on a construction site. We shared our food with each other. Again: arabs and a jew shared their food.
2. A religious jew reported me to the police because the boss was more satisfied with my work than with his work.

If somebody glowers at a jew, he or she accuses the world of anti semitism. Most of the people can't judge by appearance who jewish is.

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Dear experts,

First of all sorry for my poor english.
Please correct the following text:

I have been living in israel for four years, so I can say I know them.[who do you know?]
Two first-hand experiences:
1. I worked together with arabs on a construction site. We shared our food with each other. Again: arabs and a jew shared their food.
2. A religious jew reported me to the police because the boss was more satisfied with my work than with his work.

If somebody glowers at a jew, he or she accuses the world of anti semitism. Most of the people can't judge by appearance who jewish is.

Thanks,
Gabor
English

Israel
Arabs
Jews
Jewish

anti-semitism

who is Jewish


Otherwise, grammatically it looks ok.
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