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| First of all sorry for my poor english. Please correct the following text: I have been living in israel for four years, so I can say I know them. Two first-hand experiences: 1. I worked together with arabs on a construction site. We shared our food with each other. Again: arabs and a jew shared their food. 2. A religious jew reported me to the police because the boss was more satisfied with my work than with his work. If somebody glowers at a jew, he or she accuses the world of anti semitism. Most of the people can't judge by appearance who jewish is. Thanks, Gabor |
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Israel Arabs Jews Jewish anti-semitism who is Jewish Otherwise, grammatically it looks ok. |
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| Thank you for your help. |
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