Does my motto make sense to you?

[piousoul]

My motto is as follows:

Life is not what it seems; we don't recognize ourselves as we're all lost.

I think; therefore, I doubt whether I am or not.

My dear friends, are you sure you're not dreaming? Then, it must be me that is dreaming of you?

Does it make any sense to you?
Any comments will be deeply appreciated.
Thanks.

[Harry Smith]

My motto is as follows:

Life is not what it seems; we don't recognize ourselves as we're all lost.

I think; therefore, I doubt whether I am or not.

My dear friends, are you sure you're not dreaming? Then, it must be me that is dreaming of you?

Does it make any sense to you?
Any comments will be deeply appreciated.
Thanks.

I'm trying to understand what you mean but it's not easy as you've directly translated it into English. Can you give some prompts?