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Old 13-Feb-2007, 05:56
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"Please note that our sub-contractor has recently built some rooms near the main entrance and installed some compound wall lights as well, its also need more power as well as our portakabin.

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Default Re: Kindly correct the following sentences

The problem is that it is a run-on sentence. Here's one possible fix, though maybe not the best one:

"Please note that our sub-contractor has recently built some rooms near the main entrance and installed some compound wall lights as well. It also needs more power, as does our portakabin."
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