please correct thses sentences

[blueangel]

I applied your invaluable comments to my thesis. I’ve also sent a copy of my work to Dr. Badri (my advisor) but I didn’t receive any response from him yet. I’d like to know should I submit a copy of my thesis to department too?

[svartnik]

Originally Posted by blueangel

I applied your invaluable comments to my thesis. I’ve also sent a copy of my work to Dr. Badri (my advisor) but I didn’t receive any response from him yet. I’d like to know should I submit a copy of my thesis to department too?

draw on comments sy has made
I would like to know whether (not if) I should