hello. is this sentence is good?

[luckychris]

I would appreciate it if you would correct any mistakes in all my sentences including this one.

is this sentence is good?if have any mistakes, would you please correct it.

[MikeNewYork]

I would appreciate it if you would correct any mistakes in all my sentences including this one.

is this sentence is good?if have any mistakes, would you please correct it.

Your sentence is correct, but it needs a comma after sentences.

Your question should be: Is this sentence correct? If I have made any mistakes, would you please correct them? :wink:

[henry]

I would appreciate it if you would correct any mistakes in all my sentences including this one.

is this sentence is good?if have any mistakes, would you please correct it.

Also,

Is this sentence correct? If any mistakes, would you please correct them?

:wink:

[Tdol]

Is this sentence correct? If any mistakes, would you please correct them?

:wink:

I'd say this slightly differently:
Is this sentence correct? If there are any mistakes, would you please correct them?

[luckychris]

thank you all! i learn a lot from your help.

[luckychris]

is that shoud be "thank you all! i learned a lots from your helps"?

[MikeNewYork]

is that shoud be "thank you all! i learned a lots from your helps"?

It should be: Thank you all! I learned a lot from your help.

As long as you are here to learn, you should capitalize words when it is appropriate. :wink: