Please check these sentences.

[sweetie_sneha]

Dear Teacher,

Please check the following sentences and let me know wether the words in bold are correct or not?

At present I am employed with RPC(Royal Plastic Company), as a Sales Secretary but feel that your job offers greater scope for career growth and use of my abilities.

Regards,

Sweetie

[Noego]

Dear Teacher,

Please check the following sentences and let me know wether the words in bold are correct or not?

At present I am employed with RPC(Royal Plastic Company), as a Sales Secretary but I feel that your job offers a greater scope for career growth and the realization of my potential (use of my abilities).

Regards,

Sweetie

That's my take on it.