English Sentence

[sana-the-great]

Hello,

I want to correct some english sentences I hope you will guide me good and the sentence is :

"I couldn't attend your call yesterday because I was outside and there was too much noise that why i couldn't answer your call so sorry for that."

Please correct that sentence. I will be very thankful to you.

Bye

[Anglika]

Hello,

I want to correct some English sentences. I hope you will guide me [well]. The sentence is :

"I couldn't attend [take/accept] your call yesterday because I was outside and there was too much noise [Did the noise mean you did not hear your phone ring? If so, then tell the person that]. That is why I couldn't [did not] answer your call. So sorry for that."

Please correct that sentence. I will be very thankful to you.

Bye

I think you need to study the use of punctuation a bit more.

[yrah04]

I'm sorry I wasn't able to take your call, because I was outside wherein there was too much noise, so I couldn't hear you calling that time.