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Old 18-May-2007, 04:14
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Could you please help me what wrong in these sentencees:
- One of the essential features of the modern skyscraper is being the elevator.
- The snowy egret is about the size of large crow.
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Old 18-May-2007, 04:21
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Could you please help me what wrong in these sentencees:
- One of the essential features of the modern skyscraper is having an elevator.
- The snowy egret is about the same size as the large crow.
Look at my correction above. I hope I could help you. Cheers!
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The snowy egret is about the same size as a large crow.

The egret is specific; the crow is not (they can be small, medium or big/large).
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Old 18-May-2007, 17:58
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The snowy egret is about the same size as a large crow.

The egret is specific; the crow is not (they can be small, medium or big/large).
Let it be "a large crow"
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Pardon me, but the first sentence?
I would say simply "is an elevator" not "having an elevator."
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Damn, that egret is one big bird. Can it feed a family of 4?
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