Please edit this letter

[k_hesham71]

Dear editor I would like to appreciate your effort and help during the last period. I’m asking you kindly to inform me about my paper status , where I respond to all comments that I received from you 4 months ago. While waiting you reply please accept my best regardsYours Hesham

[beanfromex]

k_hesham71 Dear editor I would like to appreciate your effort and help during the last period. I’m asking you kindly to inform me about my paper status , where I respond to all comments that I received from you 4 months ago. While waiting you reply please accept my best regardsYours Hesham


Clarificiation please,

Editor- Have you submitted a book or article to a publishing house?
To whom is this letter written if not an editor?
Last period- possibly last semester? (what period of time is this?)
What type of paper, exam, thesis, essay?
Four months ago an item was graded that you wrote, and you responded in writing addressing this person's comments?

[k_hesham71]

Clarificiation - This message for an editor of IT journal , where I submitted a scientfic article - By the period I mean the reviewing period - I just want from you to correct the grammer error in the letter and enhance its style to be more kind, pleas

[beanfromex]

K-hesham71- This is on the formal side, which I think will serve you better than an informal inquiry.
I am still unsure re. reviewing period ( of the article your submitted? ).
So, you can tailor this format to suit your needs.
If anyone else on the thread wants to add something to this, please go ahead.

Best of luck
Beanfromex
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Mr. Jones
So and So Scientific Magazine,
Toronto,
Ontario.

Attention: Mr.Jones
Senior Editor.

Re: Inquiry of paper submitted.

Dear Sir:

Firstly, I would like to offer you my sincere appreciation for your time and all efforts on my behalf.

Secondly, could you please inform me of the status of my paper I submitted four month ago.

Once again, thank you.

Yours,
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[RonBee]

Originally Posted by k_hesham71

Dear editor I would like to appreciate your effort and help during the last period. I’m asking you kindly to inform me about my paper status , where I respond to all comments that I received from you 4 months ago. While waiting you reply please accept my best regardsYours Hesham

Dear editor:

I appreciate the help you have given me and your efforts on my behalf during the past few months. I am asking you to kindly inform me about my paper status, where I respond to all comments that I received from you four months ago. Please accept my best regards.

Yours,
Hesham