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Joining of sentences using 'despite'
There was a massive campaign. Not many people came to the school funfair.
Not many people came to the school funfair despite a massive campaign.
Not many people came to the school funfair despite there being a massive campaign.
Which is correct sentence in joining the above sentences in bold?
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Re: Joining of sentences using 'despite'
Semantically, they both have the same meaning. However, I would say that the first is better.
The problem with the sentence is that it is not clear what the "massive campaign" set out to do - encourage people to come, promote the school event, campaigned against the event.
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