A Fatal Accident

[Tdol]

before the last could cross the street.


I'd either use 'latter' or simply 'he' (I don't think there would be much confusion)

[Tdol]

The beginning of the accident starts

The accident started...

[Tdol]

due to a deadly hit on the head

deadly blow

[Tdol]

coffined the corpse

I'd say 'lay the bady in a coffin'. You could use 'corpse' as well, but we often say 'body' when we are talking about a person we know because it sounds less medical.

[Tdol]

associates the squeal of a car to his little brother’s fatal accident
If use 'associates... with'

burried - buried


when human brain is prompted by a same current stimulus

the human brain... a similar stimulus' (I'd drop 'current')

Ayed,
This is a very good piece of writing. You have told the story in a rather moving way and drawn something out of it.

[Ayed]

Shokran luka

Many thumb up.
Many thanks to you, my teacher tdol.

[Tdol]

You're very welcome.