I will really appreciate your help!!!

[gatadu]

Hi, this is my resume. actually, it is pretty messy.
but pls, correct this. I really need your help.
coz I have been unemployeed for about 3months so far.
HElP ME!!!



OBJECTIVE
n Forward-thinking sales assistant seeking a position utilizing my skills and my academic background in fashion.
n Professional with 3 years of experience in sales assistant and retail assistant. Strategic and creative thinker
with effective communication and managing skills.
n Ability to promote teamwork and develop relationships with clients and team member.

EMPLOYMENT HISTORY
Hanama Collection Co., Ltd:
Operate a business under franchise of Valley Girl Co.,Ltd
Targeted young age woman
Manage low price garments and accessories

Retailing Assistant – Sydney, Australia 09.2005 ~ 02.2007
l Created and corrected data on FUTURA (retail program)
l Communication – mailed and phoned suppliers and sales assistants to provide information and direction
l Analyzed weekly data and distribute goods to each branch
l Inspection – inspected goods by color, condition, barcode, price and inform problems to senior manager
l Organized document – filled documents and photos
l Classified and packed season off goods
l Collected and amended invoices
l Trained new employees

Storia Trading Co., Ltd: Trading agency
Operated a business with exclusive license of ‘RODEL’, ‘VISCONF’ (ITALY)
Targeted middle and old age woman
Managed high price woven jacket and wool, fur coat

Agent (Sales assistant) – Seoul, Korea 04.2001 ~ 06.2003
l Market and Price research

- Observed and drew item designs in market
- Researched prices of items as a mystery shopper
l Support developing design - drew details of developing item and explain modifications to Italy vendor
l Support Customer (buyer)
- Informed conditions and procedures of import such as the date of depart and arrival, the due date of remittance and document requirements for entry.
- Responded customer’s needs as provide accurate price, amounts and
relevant fabrics for selected garments.
l Communicated and collaborated with forwarding agency and custom agency.
l Display and organize show room - displayed and organized S/S, F/W season samples regularly

l Organize documents and data - created diagrams of all samples and created basic data for order amount and stock
l Manage complain and problem – responded simple problems as provide possible solutions with positive attitude

TECHNICAL SKILLS

I have intermediate grade computer skill such as Ms - Word, PowerPoint, Excel and I certificated in Senior First Aid. Also, I have skills in visual art such as drawing and painting. Any challenges that I might be confronted with are truly welcomed.

[Tdol]

in sales assistant and retail assistant- these are jobs so it should be 'as a sales...'
team member- members
Operate a business- past tense (same with 'Manage')?
distribute goods- past tense
inform problems to senior manager- informed senior manager of any problems
Organized document - plural
middle and old age woman- only one woman?
jacket and wool, fur coat- jackets, and wool and fur coats
of developing item- plural??
Italy vendor- Italian
date of depart- departure (despatching/shipping?)
Responded customer’s- to customers'
as provide- by providing
l Organize documents and data - created diagrams of all samples and created basic data for order amount and stock- past tense
l Manage complain and problem – responded simple problems as provide possible solutions with positive attitude- past tense
computer skill - skills

[gatadu]

thank you so much^^
god will bless u~~~

[Tdol]

Good luck.