Grammar is correct but the sentence is awkward!

[Fazzu]

Neither James nor I am keen on attending the concert.

Why is the sentence awkward although it is gramatically correct?

And why is this sentence below is better than the above one?

Both James and I are not keen on attending the concert.

Thanks a bunch.

[Mister Micawber]

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I don't see it as particularly awkward, as the verb rightly is in concord with the proximal subject. (The alternative is Neither I nor James is keen on attending.)

However, that is also the reason that your second sentence is more felicitous.
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[udara sankalpa]

Hi
What about "Neither James nor I are keen on ...."

I bet this is correct too, anyone reckon?

Cheers
Udara

[Jason72]

Not him, nor me - He isn't. I am not, too.

Does that help?

[Fazzu]

Originally Posted by Mister Micawber

However, that is also the reason that your second sentence is more felicitous.

Thanks Mister Micawber. I knew it!

[Fazzu]

Originally Posted by udara sankalpa

Hi
What about "Neither James nor I are keen on ...."

I bet this is correct too, anyone reckon?

Cheers
Udara

Hello Udara,

I suppose it's not correct. It should be "Neither James nor I am..".

How about these sentences for you to see clearly if I am right:

"Neither Rita nor Jonny wants to go to the concert"
"Neither Michelle nor Michael is going to the concert"

I am sorry that I am unable to show a clear picture of the grammar rule.
I am sure the teachers here will help you.

All the best,