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Is this sentence correct:
1-In them, we have lost faith, but in you, we still have faith.
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Old 08-May-2004, 14:58
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Is this sentence correct:
1-In them, we have lost faith, but in you, we still have faith.
Yes, the sentence is correct. It sounds more smoothly and less formal in my opinion.

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You could shorten it be saying 'but not in you'.
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Old 08-May-2004, 17:54
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Is this sentence correct:
1-In them, we have lost faith, but in you, we still have faith.
It is correct, but it is a bit flowery/poetic.

More natural would be:

We have lost faith in them, but we still have faith in you.

Or, as TDOL suggested:

We have lost faith in them but not in you.

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Is this sentence correct:
1-In them, we have lost faith, but in you, we still have faith.
It is correct, but it is a bit flowery/poetic.

More natural would be:

We have lost faith in them, but we still have faith in you.

Or, as TDOL suggested:

We have lost faith in them but not in you.

:wink:
Mike, you don't sound to be fond of poetic style of writing? Am I right? :wink:
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Old 08-May-2004, 22:44
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Originally Posted by navi
Is this sentence correct:
1-In them, we have lost faith, but in you, we still have faith.
It is correct, but it is a bit flowery/poetic.

More natural would be:

We have lost faith in them, but we still have faith in you.

Or, as TDOL suggested:

We have lost faith in them but not in you.

:wink:
Mike, you don't sound to be fond of poetic style of writing? Am I right? :wink:
I think it fine for speeches, poetry, some literature. It sounds strange in most other uses. :wink:
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I think it fine for speeches, poetry, some literature. It sounds strange in most other uses. :wink:
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