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Old 19-Jul-2007, 12:01
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Post Please correct the following sentences

Kindly correct the following sentences, and tell me which is the best one

1. Please note that our client asked us to hold the above mentioned work
as they are out of country.
2. Please note that the above mentioned work is being held up as our client
is out of country
3 As per our client's instructions, the above mentioned work has been
held up.

4. The work will be commenced only when they are in town
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What about?

Our client is out of country and for that reason has asked that we put a hold on the work mentioned above.
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Thanks for your help !

is sentence 4 correct ?
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4. The work will commence once they are back in town.
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