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Racial Discrimination Experience: Shanghai idc Network Information Technology Co., Ltd(Shang Hai idc Co.,Ltd)
Today I see a information on the net, which is about the Shanghai idc Network Information Technology Co., Ltd. (Shang Hai idc Co.,Ltd). At this time. Suddenly, I felt very angry, because one of my friends is also there, of course, He is Chinese. He told me a lot of work experience, and all are very annoyed
Once, My friend send a message to customers, just to remind them of cn domain name registration, because we all know the domain name is unique, for foreign companies, for them registered a domain name in China is an important market competition factors. So my friends work are to find these big company and remind them the cn domain of their brand are much possible be register by others and hope them can register it as soon as possible. I think is a very warm suggestion for us, also for them. But their suggestion was criticized by them. Why ?
Let ‘s see the message which they send to those company:
Dear sir,
We are Shanghai IDC Network Information Technology Co., Ltd(Shang Hai idc Co.,Ltd), a domain name register organization in China. We have something urgent need to confirm with your company. I found that your company has not register the cn domain in china. Now we are in charge of this matter . Meanwhile Shanghai IDC Network Information Technology Co., Ltd(Shang Hai idc Co.,Ltd) is also a legitimate professional agency which have the right to deal the outside foreign cn domain name application and registration. In order to keep other party from using these domain names,hope to get your confirmation about these domain names?ˉregistration asap.
Please let someone in your company who is responsible for information management contact us as soon as possible.

Is there any wrong or other dirty words? Nothing, just give a friendly suggestion and what the Racial Discrimination Person said? I felt very angry about this thing!
Some times they got many vicious words from them, like the bad little yellow man or other Racial Discrimination words! It’s really sick! Of course, there are many big company did such things. So my friends also would not let these people register cn domain. I support such way to deal with these things.
About the article which slander the Shanghai IDC Technology Information Co., Ltd. (Shang Hai idc Co.,Ltd) I saw today, I think it mush be the person who are refused by Shanghai IDC Technology Information Co., Ltd to register the cn domain name, so they do the base act.
If you want to know more about this Shanghai idc company, you could land on the website: Shanghai IDC Network Information & Technology Co.,Ltd then you will know what I said.

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Racial Discrimination Experience: Shanghai idc Network Information Technology Co., Ltd(Shang Hai idc Co.,Ltd)
Today I saw some information on the net, which was about the Shanghai idc Network Information Technology Co., Ltd. (Shang Hai idc Co.,Ltd). At this time. Suddenly, I feel very angry, because one of my friends is also there, of course, he is Chinese. He told me a lot of work experience, and all were very annoyed
Once, My friend sent a message to customers, just to remind them of cn domain name registration, because we all know the domain name is unique, for foreign companies, for them is a registered a domain name in China an important market competition factor. So my friends' work is to find these big company and remind them the cn domain of their brand is possible if you're registered by others and hope they can register it as soon as possible. I think is a very warm suggestion for us, also for them. But their suggestion was criticized by them. Why ?
Let ‘s see the message which they sent to those company:
Dear sir,
We are Shanghai IDC Network Information Technology Co., Ltd(Shang Hai idc Co.,Ltd), a domain name register organization in China. We have something urgent need to confirm with your company. I found that your company has not registered the cn domain in china. Now we are in charge of this matter . Meanwhile Shanghai IDC Network Information Technology Co., Ltd(Shang Hai idc Co.,Ltd) is also a legitimate professional agency which has the right to deal the outside foreign cn domain name application and registration. In order to keep other parties from using these domain names, hope to get your confirmation about these domain names?ˉregistration asap.
Please let someone in your company who is responsible for information management contact us as soon as possible.


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