well :
*firstly i ordered a soup ORis it better to say I asked for a soup???
* make a big party for him OR make him a big party?
hellOo I'm Diana and I'm writing because I'm confuse about some different things because I'm writing a formal letter to a restaurant to complain about the poor service, well I'm gOing tO write them in this order I dO hope yOu CAN HELP ME!!=) thank you so much
well :
*firstly i ordered a soup ORis it better to say I asked for a soup???
* make a big party for him OR make him a big party?
I would suggest you post the whole text of your letter. That way we can see if you are expressing yourself properly.