Retirement Dreams at 50

[AbdullahAhmad]

I came across a caption with the heading to be completed in less than 50 words which reads:

My retirement dreams when I reach 50 are .............

and I wrote ......to own a splendid house that amazes everyone,to maintain a healthy lifestyle,travelling to enchanting places everywhere,being intellectually alive most of the time and maintaing a surplus account in my bank.

Any corrections to improve the above.
Thanks.

[Anglika]

I came across a caption with the heading to be completed in less than 50 words which reads:

My retirement dreams when I reach 50 are .............

and I wrote ......to own a splendid house that amazes everyone, maintain a healthy lifestyle, travel to enchanting places everywhere, be intellectually alive most of the time and possess a healthy bank account.

Any corrections to improve the above.
Thanks.

In a listing of this kind, it is not necessary to continually use "to" in front of the verbs. Remember to put a space after a punctuation mark.