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how can I do it? (rewrite)
hello!
i must do rewrite this sentence and i made that and is it right or are there another choices? thanks
He lives near his office, so she doesn't spend much time travelling to work.
If he didn't live near his office he'd spend a lot of time travelling
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Re: how can I do it? (rewrite)

Originally Posted by
Crocus_
hello!
I must rewrite this sentence and
I've done it. Is it right or are there
other choices? thanks
He lives near his office, so he doesn't spend much time travelling to work. If he didn't live near his office, he'd spend a lot of time travelling
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It is fine.
Another alternative:
He doesn't spend much time travelling as he lives near to his office
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Re: how can I do it? (rewrite)

Originally Posted by
Anglika
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It is fine.
Another alternative:
He doesn't spend much time travelling as he lives near to his office
Thank you very much.
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