can u please check my letter?????

[choezom]

this is a formal letter i am about to send to my ex school asking for my pass certificates of either class 9 or 10 for my school here told me to bring that or i will be put in lower grade which i think i dont deserve.

Dear Mr.......
I am writing this letter to request you to give me the pass certificates of either class 9 or 10.
As my school here, the authorities told me to bring my pass certificate lest i will be put in lower grade.
So i anticipate your kind consideration.
Thanking you
yours sincerely
............

[Anglika]

Welcome to the forums!

Originally Posted by choezom

this is a formal letter i am about to send to my ex school asking for my pass certificates of either class 9 or 10 for my school here told me to bring that or i will be put in lower grade which i think i dont deserve.

Dear Mr.......
I am writing this letter to request that you send me the pass certificate of either class 9 or 10. The authorities at my school here have asked me to bring my pass certificate, otherwise I will be put into a lower grade.
I look forward to receiving the certificate soon.

yours sincerely
............

Good luck!

[choezom]

thanks Anglika,
I am grateful for your helping hands.

choezom.