Any grammar mistakes in the line?

[asad hussain]

Dear Teachers,
Please have a look at the following short letter and make sure the words sound professional and sentence structure, flow, punctuation, mood, and
tense are presented in a manner that makes sense, while looking out for
inconsistencies.


So many thanks in advance.

Best regards,
Asad

Dear Calvin

Please handle these waiver cases, as they have been quite old now. I have talked to Mr. Thomson about this. He has said these are not my cases, and will be handled by you.

Thank you

[arunp]

Dear Teachers,
Please have a look at the following short letter and make sure the words sound professional and sentence structure, flow, punctuation, mood, and
tense are presented in a manner that makes sense, while looking out for
inconsistencies.


So many thanks in advance.

Best regards,
Asad

Dear Calvin

Please handle these waiver cases, as they have been quite old now. I have talked to Mr. Thomson about this. He has said these are not my cases, and will be handled by you.

Thank you

Suggestion from arunp, not a teacher.
Dear Calvin,

I would request you to handle these old waiver cases. I had a talk with Mr. Thomson on this matter and he suggested that these cases should be handled by you.

Thanking you, etc etc