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| I would like to have your guidandance for followings : 1. If I will put focus on [in America], which sentence is better? ; 1) In America I studied linguistics or 2) I studied linguistics in America 2. If I will put focus on [Shakespeare], which sentence is better? ; 1) Shakespeare wrote that play or 2) That play was written by Shakespeare 3. If I will put focus on [a book], which sentence is better? ; 1) A book is on the desk or 2) There is a book on the desk 4. If I will put focus on [the salt], which sentence is better? ; 1) Pass the salt to me, please or 2) Pass me the salt, please In short, if I will put focus on certain word(s), where I should put the aiming word(s), at the "beginning" place or "ending" place? I guess the "beginning" place is better to induce readers' attention. Best Rgds, Last edited by deepcosmos; 13-Sep-2007 at 19:28. |
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| 1- 2 (1 sounds as if you studied something else in another country) 2- 1 3- 2 (Don't like the first choice) 4 No difference to me. |
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| Hello, Tdol ! Thanks for your reply. 1. Re your reply to para.1 commenting that 1 sounds as if I studied something else in anothet country, do you have a general tendency that you will try to put the focused word(s) at ending place in a sentence as much as possible ? 2. Re para.1 which will be better expression between above 1)+2) each for the questions ; "What did you study in America ?" / "Where did you study linguistics ?" 3. Re para.2 is it o.k if I understand that passive form is to emphasize the object of positive form ? 4. If I will put focus on "in the morning", which sentence is better ? 1) In the morning he jogs 2) He jogs in the morning Will await to hear soon, Best rgds, Last edited by deepcosmos; 14-Sep-2007 at 18:41. |
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| 1 Not always- focus can shift. 2 Both of those would give me the second answer. 3 The passive shifts the focus onto the play rather than the author. 4 The second sounds more natural. The first is OK, but it sounds a bit too formal for such a mundane sentence without further context. If it were part of a longer text about his day, then it would sound OK. |
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| Hello, Tdol ! many thanks for your reply with notes. Best rgds |
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