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Old 15-Sep-2007, 06:41
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correct, please? thank you.

This makes me think about the reality of life. the distance from you to me is the same as from me to you. I知 looking at you, while you are looking at me. I teach you and I learn from you as you teach me you learn from me. I知 saying this to you and I知 hearing this myself. So, always see the truth from the other side, that値l make you that close to the real truth or the destiny of our lives.
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Old 18-Sep-2007, 04:29
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correct, please? thank you.

correct, please? thank you.

This makes me think about the reality of life. the distance from you to me is the same as from me to you. I知 looking at you, while you are looking at me. I teach you and I learn from you as you teach me you learn from me. I知 saying this to you and I知 hearing this myself. So, always see the truth from the other side, that値l make you that close to the real truth or the destiny of our lives.
This makes me think about the reality of life. the distance from you to me is the same as from me to you. I知 looking at you, while you are looking at me. I teach you and I learn from you justas you teach me andyou learn from me. I知 saying this to you and I知 hearing this myself. So, always see the truth from the other side, that値l make you that close to the real truth or the destiny of our lives.

It's fine, Dogg. Note the few corrections I made.
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thank you riverkid
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