Liberal approaches to modernization

[angliholic]

Liberal approaches to modernization are closely linked to economic globalization.



The following is what I paraphrase the above statement; correct me if I am wrong. Thanks.

Liberal approaches (leading) to modernization are tightly related to economic globalization.

[amigos4]

Originally Posted by angliholic

Liberal approaches to modernization are closely linked to economic globalization.



The following is what I paraphrase the above statement; correct me if I am wrong. Thanks.

Liberal approaches (leading) to modernization are tightly related to economic globalization.

Hi, angliholic!

Both sentences are correct.

Liberal approaches leading to modernization are tightly related to economic globalization.

Liberal approaches to modernization are closely linked to economic globalization.

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[angliholic]

Originally Posted by amigos4

Hi, angliholic!

Both sentences are correct.

Liberal approaches leading to modernization are tightly related to economic globalization.

Liberal approaches to modernization are closely linked to economic globalization.

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The following is what I paraphrase the above statement; correct me if I am wrong. Thanks.

I would recommend the following: I am paraphrasing the above statement. Please let me know what corrections, if any, need to be made. Thank you.

Thank you, Amigos, for your correction and your help.
I get it now.