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Old 19-Oct-2007, 03:15
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Hi there,
Can you proofread the following sentence?

I like lessons in which we have to sit all the time. That's why I like physical education lessons the most.

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Do you really sit all the time in physical education lessons? You might want to make the verb in the first sentence negative.
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hi there,
Oh, i am sorry, it should be
'I don' t like the lessons in which.....'

please help
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