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Old 25-Oct-2007, 18:28
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Smile grammar correction of translated motto

HI!

I translated my favourite motto from my mother tongue (Slovak) but Iīm not sure if it is grammar correct. Can you advise me?

Motto:

"Do what you want to other people do to you and donīt do what you donīt want to other people do to you. "

Thanks, Janko
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Old 25-Oct-2007, 18:35
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HI!

I translated my favourite motto from my mother tongue (Slovak) but Iīm not sure if it is grammar correct. Can you advise me?

Motto:

"Do what you want to other people do to you and donīt do what you donīt want to other people do to you. "

Thanks, Janko

Janko,

The normal saying for this in English, and it's kind of a frozen formula, is,

"Do unto others what you would have them do unto you."

"Do [what you want] to other people [do to you and donīt do] what you [donīt] want [to] other people to do to you. " ---->>>>>


"Do to other people what you want other people to do to you."
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Old 25-Oct-2007, 18:47
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Janko,

The normal saying for this in English, and it's kind of a frozen formula, is,

"Do unto others what you would have them do unto you."

"Do [what you want] to other people [do to you and donīt do] what you [donīt] want [to] other people to do to you. " ---->>>>>


"Do to other people what you want other people to do to you."
Thank you for your quick help riverkid!
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