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Old 28-Oct-2007, 12:52
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Default Do these make sense?

Dear teachers,

The following are the headline and subhead of my feature article, wonder if they are correct?

CREATIVE and with DIVERSE TALENTS
Teacher/song-writer/columnist shares experience

Your help is very much appreciated. Thanks. :)

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Kenneth Lee
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Default Re: Do these make sense?

It makes sense, but doesn't sound natural. I would have said:

CREATIVE and TALENTED (two similar adjectives)
Teacher/song-writer/columnist shares experience


The fact that the teacher is also a song writer and columnist shows that his/her talents are diverse.
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