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Old 28-Oct-2007, 14:53
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Is this sentence correct and does it has a meaning?


Only art is able to accomplish this mission as it unifies people’s differences and vices regardless.

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Old 28-Oct-2007, 18:05
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Any help!!!!

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Default Re: Is the structure of this sentence correct?!!

You have a incongruent argument.

"Unifies differences", Unifies vices".

What you want, I believe, is:

"Only art is able to accomplish this mission as it unifies people, regardless of their differences and vices."

Herein you unify people, rather than the differences and vices they embrace.

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Old 28-Oct-2007, 18:34
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You have a incongruent argument.

"Unifies differences", Unifies vices".

What you want, I believe, is:

"Only art is able to accomplish this mission as it unifies people, regardless of their differences and vices."

Herein you unify people, rather than the differences and vices they embrace.

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I want to make sure if that my sentence has the meaning you provided in your suggestion.

Thank you for your reply

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