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Old 29-Oct-2007, 23:41
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Default I'm going to plant orchards on it.

A: What are you going to do with your land?
B: I'm going to plant orchards on it.




The lline in bold sounds lame to me. I feel like rewording it as the following:

I'm going to plant fruits on it.
I'm going to make it into orchards.

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Old 29-Oct-2007, 23:55
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Default Re: I'm going to plant orchards on it.

I plan to cover it in orchards.

It shall become bountiful orchards.

"Orchards," exclaimed the new owner, "Orchards my boy, it shall bring forth a superfluity of fruit!"



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Old 30-Oct-2007, 00:21
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I plan to cover it in orchards.

It shall become bountiful orchards.

"Orchards," exclaimed the new owner, "Orchards my boy, it shall bring forth a superfluity of fruit!"



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Thanks, Wholeman, for the beautiful and expressive wording.
I can assert that you're a master with words.
But does the origanal sentence sound right to you?
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Yes, it is fine, however as you stated, it is rather uninformative and bland.

Apple Orchards, Peach Orchards, Cherry Orchards, Orange Orchards, Avocado Orchards, all are at least a little more informative than simply Orchards.


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Yes, it is fine, however as you stated, it is rather uninformative and bland.

Apple Orchards, Peach Orchards, Cherry Orchards, Orange Orchards, Avocado Orchards, all are at least a little more informative than simply Orchards.


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Thanks, Wholeman, for your informative and entertaining versions.
You're genuinely good at words.

For what it's worth, are you a major of literature?
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Ah... no, I'm an Author.


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Ah... no, I'm an Author.


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Thanks, Wholeman.

I'd expect you said you are a writer.
I doubt whether a writer is equivalent to an Author.
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It mostly depends on just how verbose you are.

Authors are writers, but not all writers are authors.

Newspaper reporters are writers, but seldom are they authors.

I hope that explains the difference to you.

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It mostly depends on just how verbose you are.

Authors are writers, but not all writers are authors.

Newspaper reporters are writers, but seldom are they authors.

I hope that explains the difference to you.

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Thanks, Wholeman, for the subtle and tricky response.
As far as my knowledge goes, an author has one of the connotations, to wit, fathering a few books.
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